Check these two writings and tell me your opinion

October 11, 2022Shayan Zaidi

You have two letters here. Both are written by different students. These can go in the IELTS or CELPIP task 1s. One student will score the top mark while the other will fail miserably.

…Can you tell which one is which?

We do this exercise in our classes and it’s called “self realization”. It is by far one of the most effective exercises you can use!

So think about when parents tell you not to do something when you are young… you do it anyway…. you suffer the consequences… then you say, ‘I should have listened.”

This exercise will do exactly that! It will make you realize mistakes yourself. When you go through it, you will realize some things that you might be doing incorrectly and it will help you reflect on your own skills!

That’s why most teachers say that they learn more while they are teaching as compared to when they are students! This is your chance to be the teacher!

Reply to this email with your thoughts. Which letter gets what mark and why do you think that is. I will personally correct you if you are wrong and give you ideas!

Shayan Zaidi

Shayan Zaidi is an experienced educator and the lead instructor at HZad Education, where he passionately helps students excel in language proficiency tests such as CELPIP, IELTS, PTE, SAT, and more. With a deep understanding of each test’s nuances, Shayan has guided over 11,000 students towards achieving their language goals through expertly designed courses.
Shayan is dedicated to ensuring every student receives personalized attention and effective strategies to succeed. His approach combines years of teaching experience with an in-depth understanding of the various language exams, providing students with the tools they need to succeed both academically and professionally.